The Shrine Without Love

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The Shrine Without Love

Words shall been spoken for the greatest lords;

Without no meanings for the truth of those.

Who scares the pain of the forgiven love;

The shrine of living with roses and luck.



Roses and proses can give us prop;

Things that exchanged our styles for long.

Populates hearts of words in lonely sorts;

The world is shifting the instincts of those.



Fighting the war for rising peace and love;

Without no reason we kill them all.

Those who swear for the name of god;

Are the first one who fooled our luck.



Just a vagabond in a state of support;

A desired aspiration for being more.

A perception without no lust to reprove;

Cant no longer be so absurd to be truth.


By: Edison J. Torres Soto

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tinygirl commented on The Shrine Without Love

02-05-2009

it really got inside me and made me know how you can express your words on paper

tinygirl commented on The Shrine Without Love

11-30-2008

your poem was wonderfull read some of mine tinygirl

lilfairie commented on The Shrine Without Love

11-29-2008

Wow, we should all be so lucky to be able to write with such passion.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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