The Show

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    • bacar10
    • BACK IN MOTION. I TOOK A YEAR OFF WRITING POETRY BUT RANDOM FEELINGS ARE BACK SO STAY TUNED. I JUST POSTED A NEW POEM 3 DAYS AGO CALLED WIFE. I HOPE YOU ENJOY

    The Show

    What a great time I had at the show,
    At the beginning was boredom,
    But interest soon came to grow,
    The beginning sure did reveal the end,
    Leaving no sequel for a new story to begin,
    Action, Drama, Comedy, and Suspense so confusing,
    No fantasy cartoons, no illusions,
    If there is a sequel, then I left out mystery,
    If there is a sequel, then this show made history,
    Rated everybody, because the truth prevails,
    TV is broke, well a book works when all else fails,
    This show was great; it had a sad ending,
    Most shows are typical cause everyone's always winning,
    Most sad endings reveal a message, so learn,
    Let me critique the show because its my turn,
    I wish I can see it twice,
    But I can't because the show is my life.

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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    bacar10’s Poems (7)

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    Wife 2
    Angel 2
    Dear World 1
    I Miss Love 0
    The Show 0
    My Life 2
    Cool 5