The Seed Thrower

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    The Seed Thrower

    the car is traveling quickly

    approaching a dove

    that's gathering twigs in the road

    to build her nest

    the driver sees the dove

    but doesn't slow down

    but its not over for the dove

    for she flew

    before the car struck her

    she escaped without knowing

    that she escaped from death or injury

    the driver still speeds

    and the dove still gathers

     

    a man sees a lonely dove

    he wants to care for her

    he has food and shelter

    he wants to give to them to her

    he coaxes her, however,

    his hand shakes

    and demeanor is jaded

    she dodges the cage door

    he was about to close on her

    she just escaped incarceration

    she is beautiful

    too beautiful to be caged up

    the man still coaxes

    and the dove is still lonely

     

    a farmer loads his gun

    to give warning shots to the birds

    who are nesting in his orchard

    and eating away at his crop

    the farmer points his gun

    in the direction of a dove

    who sits in a tree

    looking for food for her chicks

    eyeing a worm, she hears a click

    she flies away escaping death or injury

    the farmer misses and shoots a limb

    the farmer will shoot again
    and she will continue to hunt

     

    A man throws seed in his backyard

    before he goes to work

    he stands at his door, waiting

    sipping his coffee

    she shows up to eat

    he watches her

    he dreams of flying with her

    he knows she gathers and why

    so he puts out extra seed

    he likes to spoil her

    he wants her to stay

    he wants to build her a house

    however, she is skeptical

    he hopes she is aware that;

    he drives with his foot hovering the brake

    hates cages

    and doesn't own a gun

     

    he will continue to throw seed

    and look forward to her presence

    he hopes she will perch close to him

     not all hunt to kill

    not all hunt for love

    some hunt for its in their nature

    and some hunt to cage their prey

    the seed thrower cannot speak for all hunters

    he can only speak for himself

    he hunts because he enjoys watching her fly

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    dylandean commented on The Seed Thrower

    11-03-2009

    Dark and moody. An allegory about freedom? Good one.

    SThomas

    11/05/2009

    No freedom involved, its about women and the type of men the choose...

    BigDaddyCash commented on The Seed Thrower

    11-03-2009

    Interesting and unique, great content and imagery.; It was a delightful read. Thanks for sharing. LOL, BDC

    icu2 commented on The Seed Thrower

    11-03-2009

    SThomas! This is beautiful! It is uniquely different, and I love the entwining of the dove throughout the poem, as it fly's from one scene to the next! Just lovely.........and unusual!

    SThomas

    11/03/2009

    well finally...i hope its a truthful comment, feedback is nice...i do thank you Ms. Anita...

    icu2

    11/10/2009

    You callin me a liar, Buster?? Huh...?? Awww...just kidden..Take care poet.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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