the rose

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    the rose

    The Rose

    I plucked a rose from the bush by the door
    A thorn pricked my finger made it bloody and sore
    As I washed the blood from my hand with care
    I thought of the rose so delicate and fair
    Was it trying to tell me as I winced with pain
    Leave me alone so that others may see me again
    Or was it striking back from the brink of death
    Landing its own final blow with its own final breath

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    Sushama commented on the rose

    02-04-2009

    Excellent poem.Cant leave reading once.

    Gusto commented on the rose

    12-19-2008

    I think this excellant and the darn rating won't post the 10 I gave it. Know that it is.

    countrypoet commented on the rose

    12-17-2008

    Another very good good poem.Keep up the good work!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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