The moment

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The moment

you're watering the flowers
-a pleasant smile on your face-
and i think of this very moment
a hundred years
later...

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oreo5560 commented on The moment

09-25-2009

There are always moments in our lives that stay imprinted on us that no matter how many years go by we will never forget..I have been going throught that often the past couple of years-wondering why sometimes my heart and mind have remembered something maybe so simple yet obviously important!

Blueroad

09/25/2009

I agree with you, and I think the reason why those simple things cannot be forgotten is that most probably they have brought about a great and everlasting change in our life.

lindabrito commented on The moment

09-21-2009

I am glad to see that you are writing more. I love to read your work, so keep it up o.k. Linda

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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