The first Love.

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  • Lost Love

    The first Love.

    Today was the day that i fell in love....
    The one little kiss that i would'nt of...
    The most amazing time in my life..
    The most amazing girl, My miss lady right.

    She opened my heart & tought me to cry.
    She was the ONLY reason i did'nt want to die.

    So baby please come to me once more.
    Repair the heart that you once tore.

    The love i felt for you @ the time , Was unexplainible,
    It blew my mind.

    I'd like to thankyou for saving my life, For
    helping me fight through all lives strifes.

    You showed me this world is a wonmderful place.
    And all it took was a look at your face.

    I want you to know that our love was true.
    I want you to know that i still love you.

    Your on my mind everytime that i think,
    I see your gorgeouse face everytime i blink.

    So thanks again for being a freind. Thats one thing we'll
    have till the end.

    So i wrote you this poem to show
    you it was real, heart and soul, not
    just sex appeal.

    I cant deny the fact that it was'nt true,
    I just want you to know that i still love you.

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    ALvrNtAFtr commented on The first Love.

    01-12-2009

    Wow. Wish I could talk to you right now. I am so sorry.

    mysticpoet commented on The first Love.

    01-02-2009

    very sweet. i love your poem.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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