The Dream

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    The Dream

    From a wish of a star, Life seemed so far
    The very distance from the sun
    I heard a faint whisper of a gun
    I could not scream, I could not shout
    As my mind stood still this very bout.
    The shadow seemed so near
    It gave me shivers and fear.
    As it started moving closer, I just stood there.
    I could not awake from this very nightmare,
    As the shadow in my dreams did appear.
    I tried to let out a sound
    But all in my dreams I could not be found.

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    JoeCaine commented on The Dream

    11-23-2009

    Great write,really enjoyed how you brought It all together.I have felt that way many times.

    optimistic commented on The Dream

    05-04-2009

    Interesting I tried understanding until the end i stopped and thought this is awesome

    Bethane1978 commented on The Dream

    04-28-2009

    Ecellent

    Enelya commented on The Dream

    04-26-2009

    I like this, it's interesting though i can't put my finger on it. I do, however, absolutely love the last line best of all.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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