the dark

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the dark

its creeping up on me
from all sides.
which i can not see.
i hear whispers in the wind
saying my name
i scream at them
and fall in shame.
walking down the dark street alone
no where to go
no place to call home.
i feel a presence of someone behind me
i turn to face them
and i see nothing.
so i turn in the other direction
and i start to retreat.
the dark is a scary place
and i dont plan on seeing it face to face.
afraid to know whats hidden inside
because it shows the true meanings
of whats its like to be trapped in the dark times.
a closed in place
that makes my heart race and race.

By: cynthia jones


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Ninjaboy commented on the dark

04-09-2010

lol, i have to say, it was really good, i liked it a lot, i feel it sort of, i hear voices, but i instead imbrace darkness with a smile on my face, for i know that in there, is a safe and comfortable place.

WrittenJustice commented on the dark

03-12-2010

seems like you were scared and alone but you ill find the inner strength to do what must be done

redbloodink commented on the dark

02-09-2010

Girly nice write with the flow to go.... right with it........ red

KagenoKitsune commented on the dark

09-20-2009

the dark is also calm, quiet, and holds secrets for those who dare the adventure. to know your self is to have courage, and you find you self while in the dark, and at that moment you will have courage. so be brave and look in to the dark places of your spirit to know who you are.

boomboom56 commented on the dark

09-20-2009

I get a scared and lonely young lady from this writing, wondering what is next in her life. Fear of the unknown and what could be. Being alone is uncool and scary. Well written.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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