The Circle
Circle yourself with what you cant see it brings us together you and me some call it energy,some call it chi but i call unity,if it couldnt be there would be no more me.
The Circle
3 Comments
Tags: Spiritual
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Dreamer123 commented on The Circle
07-23-2009
- awww!!! Your very gifted aquilat! I would love to read more from you. This is great. very spiritual. I love it and your eleven wow. almost my age. dang girl. keep up the great work thanks for sharing. God Bless you :D
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08/04/2009
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cowboyup1824 commented on The Circle
07-17-2009
- It's a nice poem. It would be better if it were broken into lines. Very short but to the point good job!
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07/17/2009
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WinterFrost commented on The Circle
07-16-2009
- Well you should break this into lines. The cadence and rhyming is good. Nice effort yours, Winter
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07/17/2009
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