The Air We Breathed

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The Air We Breathed

You tripped and said "I'm sorry" I laughed
as I caught you before you hit the grass.
We went all the way, then,
letting the blazing star's
cape cover us
before the sun could finish the day.

I still hear the acorns dropping,
the snap of a crow,
the rustle of the corn tops,
the air, I still hear
the air
we breathed.

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infiniti commented on The Air We Breathed

10-08-2009

U have painted a very vivid picture with a few mere words. Thanks for taking me there and wanting more ur friend in poetry, Infiniti

PamelaALamppa commented on The Air We Breathed

10-06-2009

I have found a poet. This is beautifully pure, filled with lovely imagery in the corn tops. I know those corn tops. This is so well done, I just had to smile. Thank you. ~Pamela

sin commented on The Air We Breathed

09-19-2009

This is good! Visual every step of the way. Electricuty in the air

GunnersDaughter commented on The Air We Breathed

09-19-2009

This evening painted, is priceless. Breathing still.

Giggle commented on The Air We Breathed

09-19-2009

this is sensual. I am liking the softness of this write.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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