TEARS

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    Poem Commentary

    I WROTE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT SHOWS THAT EVEN THOUGH YOU MIGHT HAVE LOSS A LOVED ONE, TEARS ARE GOOD TO FLOW. IT IS NOT GOOD TO HIDE YOUR PAIN. GOD WANTS YOU TO SHARE IT WITH OTHERS WHO MIGHT BE GOING THROUGH THE SAME OBSTACLE AS YOURSELF.

    TEARS

     SOMETIMES TEARS CAN MEAN MANY THINGS.
    TEARS OF JOY
    TEARS OF SADNESS
    TEARS OF PAIN
    TEARS OF LOSS
    TEARS TO SHOW HOW YOU ARE FEELING
    TEARS CAN RELIEF STRESS
    THE TEARS I HAVE IS  OF GREAT PAIN OF LOSS,LOVE AND EMOTIONAL ONES.
    TEARS CAN MEAN A BLESSING FROM THE LORD AS WELL.
    JUST KNOW THAT TEARS ARE GREAT TO HAVE ALL THE TIME.

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    optimistic commented on TEARS

    07-25-2009

    Great short yet simple thought on poetry at it's finest great write well displayed description on tears, a sense of emotion we all have.
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    pinkbutterfly commented on TEARS

    07-24-2009

    That is so true.....people CRY out in many ways therefore there are many different types of tears.
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    wildpendigus commented on TEARS

    07-23-2009

    This would be a very good ballad for a song from a musical background and standpoint with the right music and production, it shows how talented that you are, but this is just a good poem also, but I would like to see what it would sound like? WP grecowong@yahoo.com
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    miraclebaby

    07/24/2009

    thank you very much. that makes me feel so good inside.

    miraclebaby

    07/24/2009

    i can i do that to see what it would sound like

    miraclebaby

    07/24/2009

    i can i do that to see what it would sound like

    tsgirl commented on TEARS

    07-22-2009

    just knowing how true this is brought tears to my eyes. So well put, nice job.
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    miraclebaby

    07/24/2009

    thank you very much.everything i write is what i have experience in my life and went through.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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