tears unseen

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    tears unseen

    Voices bombarded my ear drums

    High and low sounds made no sense to me

    My palms pressed hard against my ears

    Darkness griped my mentality.

     

    Confusion reigned in my within

    Friends and enemies alike

    My tragedy they applauded

    Strangers traced the line of my tears

    Off and on, my heart beat fluctuates

     

    From afar, a unique sound came

    From no where, sprinkles of divine grace I felt

    Streams of tears struggled for a place with my sweat

    I shook my head in self-pity

     

    Gone is the joy I use to know

    Death is the love I use to feel

    Buried is the tenderness that I use to own

    Sorrow is now my companion

     

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    patricialouise commented on tears unseen

    07-13-2009

    Dream, has almonord1990 wrote. Stay positive in your trials. Like attracts like. Hear the music on the wind? this poem made me sad for you. "Smile and the world smiles with you."

    sassysweet commented on tears unseen

    06-16-2009

    The sadness, the hurt and the pain. You make others feel your words and take them to a place where they tryed to forget it all, yet still can feel the pain and the misery

    Jume

    06/29/2009

    Love has two sides of the same quality. The more the quality and quantity of joy it can give you, the same quality and quantity of sorow it can give if it sides were to be reversed. We only pray for peace and maybe, fun in our relationships. SWEET ROMANCE. Thanks for your comment

    Jume

    06/29/2009

    Love has two sides of the same quality. The more the quality and quantity of joy it can give you, the same quality and quantity of sorow it can give if it sides were to be reversed. We only pray for peace and maybe, fun in our relationships. SWEET ROMANCE. Thanks for your comment

    Jume

    06/29/2009

    Love has two sides of the same quality. The more the quality and quantity of joy it can give you, the same quality and quantity of sorow it can give if it sides were to be reversed. We only pray for peace and maybe, fun in our relationships. SWEET ROMANCE. Thanks for your comment

    wagus commented on tears unseen

    06-16-2009

    Very well done one can feel the pain or your loss in this one... but we are men and men don't show tears or have fears... so we hide them.. well done ...

    goldenbdapoet commented on tears unseen

    06-16-2009

    That's deep! Inner thoughts exposed. It's great to hear a man express his true emotions. Keep up the good work. Women love to know that a man has feelings too.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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