taking time to laugh out loud

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    taking time to laugh out loud
    ha ha ha, did you hear that?
    I can hear your smile in your voice, talk some more.
    if you widen the smile then the you widen your voice.

    Loudness is what i see in your face, In your eyes.
    If you have laugh lines around your eyes, i can feel your laugh

    Take time to make the lines widen, the loudness seen
    Ha, ha ha, Can you hear that?

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    2irishman2 commented on taking time to laugh out loud

    04-08-2009

    good poem, nice structure. lacks feeling but i am not confused about the message.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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