take me there

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    take me there

    When I was little I had my live planned
    now I have nothing not even a gran of sand
    I tried to stay focused on everything I did
    to bad at that time I was just a little kid
    its hard to stay focused when you're always alone
    sittin and waiting for someone to come home
    I have troubles getting over my fears
    I have no one to wipe my tears
    its not that I'm self centered, I really do care
    just give me yourself please, take me there

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    Susan821 commented on take me there

    08-07-2009

    This is really good. Is the person that you are waiting for to come home in the military?

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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