Such a Beautiful Death

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    Such a Beautiful Death

    So sullen your voice finds me;
    Like a beautiful day that never was
    Like it was there for someone, but just not for me
    Like it was a girl you see from a foggy window and think 
    for a moment she sees you 
    Looking, longing, then poof; she's gone
    With no thought of me passing in her mind and no 
    knowledge of what it is that I am....
    Just a ghost.
    Just a heart, just a man; 
    A beautiful death of heart that never was
    It makes my heart ache until I want to rip it out
    But such action would make it all meaningless....
    More meaningless than you make me feel from my window......
    Just a heart, just a man, such a beautiful death……...

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    hdmac commented on Such a Beautiful Death

    06-20-2009

    Interesting that you used "poof" in your poem. That line was amusing even though you are talking of death. Good poem.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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