Such a Beautiful Death

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    Such a Beautiful Death

    So sullen your voice finds me;
    Like a beautiful day that never was
    Like it was there for someone, but just not for me
    Like it was a girl you see from a foggy window and think 
    for a moment she sees you 
    Looking, longing, then poof; she's gone
    With no thought of me passing in her mind and no 
    knowledge of what it is that I am....
    Just a ghost.
    Just a heart, just a man; 
    A beautiful death of heart that never was
    It makes my heart ache until I want to rip it out
    But such action would make it all meaningless....
    More meaningless than you make me feel from my window......
    Just a heart, just a man, such a beautiful death……...

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    hdmac commented on Such a Beautiful Death

    06-20-2009

    Interesting that you used "poof" in your poem. That line was amusing even though you are talking of death. Good poem.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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