strugglin soul

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    strugglin soul

    Forgive me God for I have sinned and probably will again
    fightin in this world as the second hand spins i want to win
    feelin like the odds are stacked against me
    got the devil on my back and fallin prey to when he tempts me
    feelin empty.
    it seems so hard to go further
    deadly to my brother dishonored father and mother
    tryin to find a better way cause this aint workin like the other
    got multiple lovers and still wondering why we suffer
    if it dont kill you it make you tougher than a bad steak
    watch for the snakes seperate the real from the fake
    take time to meditate educate your spirit
    recognize what you fears and learn how not to fear it.

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    whytecherries25 commented on strugglin soul

    02-04-2009

    love it....very well written

    Realtalk commented on strugglin soul

    01-15-2009

    "take time to meditate educate your spirit" We all need that brotha. you are so real, the imagery is haunting becuase I feel the struggle in your words

    edgee commented on strugglin soul

    01-05-2009

    This poem, very inspirational, I feel you, much luck and hope you keep writing and to see more from you in the future....PEACE...edgee

    Corinna commented on strugglin soul

    01-03-2009

    I like this one, good flow!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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