Stripped

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    This is my first posting. I just wanted to out it out there get started and from here I will grow.

    Stripped

    There was a time when I stood strong.
    I Stood with meaning, faith, and determination.
    Then there was love
    .

    There was a time when I smiled.
    I smiled with confidence, beauty, and taste.
    Then there was hurt.

    There was a time when I was happy.
    I was happy with emotions, joy, and life.
    Then there was pain.

    There was a time when I was complete.
    And then there was you.

    There was you with your hurt, pain, and love.
    Your love which took me of course from life.

    Captured, I had no voice.

    I was taken by your smile, blinded by your words, confused by your actions. I was lost.

    There was no strength.

    There were no smiles.

    There was no emotion.

    There was no me.

    Stripped.

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    crazzyy4u commented on Stripped

    11-13-2009

    kool i really liked it im looking forward to reading some of your other works good job

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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