Story Dream

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Story Dream

Dreams are collections of thoughts
Thoughts of love,pain, and joy
Joy as in happiness
Happiness overly abundant
Abundant dreams of stories
Stories incomprehensible to every one
Everyone amazed
Amazed by my glorious stories
Stories created by dream
Dreams created by me

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koolmom0 commented on Story Dream

07-28-2013

I think you have the potential of being a fine writer. You have a wonderful imagination and you pen a nice picture of words. I would love to see you broaden your ideas and stretch you imagination to the max. I will follow your works and see how you progress. If you need help or have questions...then please contact me. :)

Iwanttogohome14

07/28/2013

Thank you that means a lot but poetry is just a side thing that I do I originally write and draw Japanese comic books but I will put another poem on here as well

Mau commented on Story Dream

04-16-2013

Very nice poem!! I like how you connect the lines by the last word in the sentence to the first word in the next sentence. Nice!!

Iwanttogohome14

04/16/2013

thank you

kkirkwood commented on Story Dream

04-10-2013

interesting subject. You use must be a dreamers. enjoyed

Iwanttogohome14

04/17/2013

thanks

videogamefreak commented on Story Dream

04-10-2013

Nice poem brah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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