STAR LIGHT

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    STAR LIGHT

    Star Light

    Star light star bright first star I see
    Tonight,take me back to when their were
    No children crying,no husband hitting wifes,
    brightest star in the sky I bow my head
    And ask you tonight,take me back to when
    Neighbors loved neighbors,and friends and family
    Was the best thing in life.
    Take me back to when it was safe for kids
    To play and go to school.take me back when
    Drugs had no chance on our streets.take me
    Back to when tere were no wars with our
    Neighbr lands.
    Please take me back,take me back,take me
    Back as far as you can.This is my wish I
    Wish upon you, take me back even if it is
    Only in my dreams as I sleep tonight.
    Just please take me back!

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    michea commented on STAR LIGHT

    11-23-2008

    Your poem was awesome...How I miss the days of when we could all play safely in the streets and not have to worry so much about drugs or kidnappers or if our neighbors are molesters or not...Isn't awesome how one can express themselves with words on

    Lois commented on STAR LIGHT

    11-23-2008

    Great poem, enjoyed it very much. L J.

    Charo commented on STAR LIGHT

    11-22-2008

    Great poem. Loved it. Take us all back. :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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