SPRING (To my daughter)
I would be,
If I could be,
With you for ever!
And then, the leaves
Would never fall,
And the Spring
Would never end,
And, you would be,
Forever be...
With me!
SP.
12/03
SPRING (To my daughter)
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JDSitton commented on SPRING (To my daughter)
12-31-2009
- A sweet poem, however I can feel the pain through it as well... i wish you the best and hope you find peace... great write!
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12/31/2009
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Tempy commented on SPRING (To my daughter)
08-21-2009
- time stopping. Thats really sweet. I think maybe take photos go places have memories and most of us make a video of you talking to her so when you do pass, she still have things from you personally that she hasn't heard if i had kids i'd do that..
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08/21/2009
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