SONG OF THE LONG-HAIRED PROPHET

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SONG OF THE LONG-HAIRED PROPHET

They’ll never fathom me. Never.
Not the way I look. I sound. Or smell.
Not even the way I cough or sneeze.
Neither the way I tuck my hair
behind my exploited ears. Nor the way,
and the reason, my hair grows like
conflagrating billows of regrets
on my head. And why I let my head burn,
burn, and burn some more.
No one would bother. But neither I could
figure out my own. There’s no way a man
could personify himself enough.

Betokened the long years of waiting for my savior,
for the great love that will untangle my heart.
A long, unkempt hair--precious as a wife;
I will never let anyone slash off my life.
And the best thing I could do
was to light up a matchstick
and forever set ablaze this agony.

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syks commented on SONG OF THE LONG-HAIRED PROPHET

05-27-2009

well constructed,beautiful work of arts.good use of diction wit d words proprly placed.am impressed.

Karma885 commented on SONG OF THE LONG-HAIRED PROPHET

04-19-2009

BEAUTIFULY WRITTEN AND SUCH A PRETTY POEM AND ON TOP OF THAT. UR A CUTIE. CAN U COMMENT ON MY POEMS

Madelynn commented on SONG OF THE LONG-HAIRED PROPHET

04-13-2009

This was very well written.I love the message you were able to get across.It sounds like you are very strong willed.An amazing and honorable trait,especially for a poet.It comes through in your work beautifully.

FaeryKing commented on SONG OF THE LONG-HAIRED PROPHET

03-25-2009

Beautifully expressive!

lightcourier commented on SONG OF THE LONG-HAIRED PROPHET

03-17-2009

1st part i liked, evoking mystery; 2nd part left me hanging

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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