sometimes love isn't enough

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sometimes love isn't enough

You apologize for the deceit for the lies, you cry.
Sometimes love isnt enough!
You forgive her down fall, through it all you take the blame.
Sometimes love isnt enough!
she can't forgive
understanding she cant give.
she says " your free live"
Sometimes love isnt enough!
you treated her better.you brought her sun, warmth.
He brings light.,constancy.
she's scared of clouds, she seen before,
she stays indoors.
she cant deal with the wheather.
Sometimes love isn't enough!
she misses the rays, the bright sunny days.
clouds of dobt cant risk the rain. the pain!
Sometimes love isnt enough!
you try to forget, 
her neglect.
of your pain, but this burning flame cant be tame loved.
Sometime love isnt enough!
you shine bright
to anothers sight.but your heat isnt as strong, your light isnt as bright, your flames are more tamed.
they keep her warm, but not hot. she may increase the blaze as your past becomes a haze. 
Sometimes love isnt enough!
 

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Worthless commented on sometimes love isn't enough

10-21-2009

Love is never enough and it ain't worth trying anymore just to be lied to and treated like a whore!! You can have all the love in the world and it don't mean a thing because the one you love just treats you like a meaningless fling! it just ain't worth the lies and bullshit!!!! Well written...

awakenedbyaroma commented on sometimes love isn't enough

07-06-2009

Hello, Keep in mind young man if your poems are a reflection of your true feelings that's good you are in touch with how you feel, but remember despite being hurt give next woman a clean slate. Don't withhold your love and goodness based on your past, because you hurt yourself that may the one your'e destined to be with. Peace

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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