Silent communication

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Silent communication

Those slow-moving afternoons of the last year's blue July, you were standing for hours by the phone with the dilemma on your finger-tips, which were retreating finally and tuning the apparatus to your heart's beat.

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poetikkk commented on Silent communication

08-03-2009

this poem is a good intriguing start but it seems undeveloped. I love the dilemma on your fomgertips. Nicew and original, Push yourself mor eon this one.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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