Short and Sweet

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  • Heartbreak

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    Eh... not my best but i had been crying the day i wrote this from finding out that the man i was inlove with had been cheating all along then asked another girl to marry him after i told him i wasnt ready... so i want really full of energy nor in the mood to wright

    Short and Sweet

     You said my eyes put you in a trance
    Even after only one glance
    You said my lips tasted ever so sweet
    And the curves on my body couldn't be beat

    Then one day i saw the truth
    These were lies you fed to sooth
    The heartache and pain you knew you'd bring
    When you gave her what was once "My" ring

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    HotPinkCupcales commented on Short and Sweet

    09-02-2010

    True. The tables turn both ways. Men are just as scandalous as women
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    djones commented on Short and Sweet

    09-02-2010

    women have done this to me more than once...i feel your pain and 69 needs to stop generalizing...women do the same thing to men as well...
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    HotPinkCupcales commented on Short and Sweet

    08-28-2010

    Thanks both of you. It's part of life and I am moving on from the hurt, and it helps to just write about it
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    JustMe69 commented on Short and Sweet

    08-27-2010

    I'm sorry that men are like this...... I'm always thankful I don't have to date them....... By the way nice write...... justme69/ aka redbloodink
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    lonewolf commented on Short and Sweet

    08-27-2010

    Ouch! betrayal always hurts. especially after so much effort was put into the relationship. God Bless
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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