She hears my whisper...

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My second attempt to describe the very few emotions that ever touched me from within.. i hope you all enjoy it, caz i never could explain the right way to express my emotion.... its hard most of the time .. isn' t it???

She hears my whisper...

She sits beside me and tells me to whisper.
Is it my senses that betray me, i would never know
As she struggle to attain my attention,
she comes nearer to hear me whisper.

She wears this green glamour silk,
yet she still looks so ravishingly simple.
She talks in a language so foreign to me,
yet she understands my whispers.

She begs me to join her in that dance, she looks through my very eyes.
As if even if i try to close or look away
she hears my thoughts down under.

i smile back only to become more foolish to her
as if she knows and hears my whisper.

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connsk8 commented on She hears my whisper...

06-09-2009

Somethings are universal aren't they?? Beautifully written and conveyed thank you , I htink you did an excellent job describing your feelings...

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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