Shattered

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    Shattered

    uncertain am i
    a fractured soul
    once confident
    now no longer whole
    i still talk loud
    and put on a show
    i act the part
    so people wont know
    ashamed am i
    of what i now am
    an empty shell
    my life a sham
    my standards are lowered
    my judgement impaired
    my heart feels heavy
    my pain is not shared
    my trust destroyed
    with tears on my sleeve
    i forgive all
    just so he wont leave
    what coward am i
    to endure this pain
    in hope against hope
    he wont do it again
    how long this torture
    before trust returns
    or will i endure again
    before my heart learns

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    Meldarth commented on Shattered

    10-07-2010

    wow; never saw this piece before. Raw, emotional......its flows well........I like it......I like it alot

    LyrehcalFire commented on Shattered

    05-16-2009

    This conveys a lot of emotion ... an excellent write indeed. I look forward to reading more of your work.

    ncsassyrn commented on Shattered

    03-15-2009

    You put a lot of my feelings about things into words. Very Nice

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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