seven

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  • Lost Love

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    i only used seven words

    seven

    I've lost the ability to go on
    the ability I've lost
    to go on I've lost
    lost to the ability
    lost to go on
    I've lost
    go ability I've lost
    go on I've lost
    the lost go on
    the lost
    the lost ability
    lost to go on
    I've lost
    on I've lost the ability to go
    go on
    the lost go
    on to the ability
    on to the lost
    on to the ability I've lost
    go

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    jj1562 commented on seven

    07-19-2010

    i choose to read this because the title seamed strange for a lost love poem and i now know why crazy twister say that seven times fast?

    DreamChild commented on seven

    03-31-2010

    its a little tongue twister its complicated but it is cool.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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