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Hate
Hate is pitch black.
It tastes like new tar.
It smells like fresh blood.
And reminds me of war.
It sounds like the wind howling in pain
Hate makes me feel like dying.
By: Joshua Gauger
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Tags: Hate
- Joshy
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05-31-2009
- i also feel the way you do about this subject. me and you write poetry opposite of each otherr. i like how this poem is short and to the point but has so much feeling
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