seminly different darkness rides

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seminly different darkness rides

seminly different darkness rides
into the night shadows dance
apon the wall as darkness rides.
seminly different darkness rides as the mist of dew rides the air
sticks on windows last flair

seminly different darkness rides as the moon
so bright as to smile the light.

semily diiferent darkness rides hear the silence as no one
walks by but the silence of the night.

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rollerderby commented on seminly different darkness rides

01-22-2009

except for a few little spelling errors, I thought it was a great poem. the visual imagery was great. I look for ward to you next posting. I hope the light has found the darkness! Doug

Doulos commented on seminly different darkness rides

11-18-2008

I like this poem a lot...great mental imagery

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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