Seeing Heaven*

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    Seeing Heaven*
    In the auditorium
    quiet and shy
    i looked at the stage
    and i saw heaven.

    in the hallway
    new and nervous
    i looked in a doorway
    and i saw heaven.

    in the classroom
    smart and funny
    i looked to my right
    and i saw heaven.

    on the bus
    loud and exuberant
    i looked right beside me
    and i saw heaven

    in my room
    quiet and cautious
    i looked in my heart
    and i saw heaven.

    i saw you. 

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    xXxJustMexXx commented on Seeing Heaven*

    04-19-2010

    aww haha i love this , like said at school lol, but yah, the picture really makes this poem really meaningful :)
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    xXxNoNormalxXx

    04/20/2010

    thanks boo* haha(: thanks.. it my favorite pic...(:

    Tempy commented on Seeing Heaven*

    04-17-2010

    how beautiful is this. The sentiment is almost perfection. I loved it
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    xXxNoNormalxXx

    04/18/2010

    thankyou..*blushing*

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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