Secret

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  • Sugah
  • is trying to big things and if you're not part of the solution then you must be the problem

Secret

I gotta secret;
it's here in my heart, 
written in bold letters, 
with every breath, 
i'm tempted to tell threatened by love but, 
calmed by logic. 
I gotta secret; 
it's here in my heart, 
ruling my life,
making decisions, 
giving me attitudes,
slowly taking me over.
I gotta secret;
it's here in my heart,
and I refuse to let her go.

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Sx9 commented on Secret

12-16-2009

so its a her,,lol..you know what thats the best place to keep it,only then it is truely a secret,,nice vibes love this,,I have one 2..lol..

hattyej commented on Secret

08-18-2009

So you gonna make us play detective with this one....what is the secret....would the last line be a hint... Very interesting writing... Keep writing...best thing in the word for moods, good and bad..

uspslady commented on Secret

06-29-2009

Intriguing write...so may I ask, what is the secret??? The suspense is killing me! And I have also been writing since a very young age. My advice to you is to keep writing!

Sugah

07/03/2009

thank you very much for the encourgement

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Sugah’s Poems (4)

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