Saved from Loneliness

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Saved from Loneliness

When I see your beauty

it make my heart beat faster,

And this time I  know that he

wont be a disaster.

 

And when you gently touch my skin

my heart will burst with joy.

It's funny how I’ve just become

affected by this boy

 

and hearing his harmonious voice

fills my ears with music.

I just love him in such a way

no one else can mimic.

 

With all these things he does to me

to make me fall in love.

It's almost like he's an angel,

that came from far above

 

Because he is just so perfect

in many different ways.

He must be the one to save me,

from future lonely days.

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ShadowStealer commented on Saved from Loneliness

09-28-2010

With how wonderfully you write it's a wonder people don't comment more on your poems, look for me!!! I loved this one, and I'm sure I'll like your others as well!!! ShadowStealer

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

edgarApoe10’s Poems (53)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Heart Shaped Box 3
Worried 3
Life Will Come Again 0
"Hi" 2
Can't Tear Us Apart 1
I Don't Know What I Was Thinking 0
Heart Can't Trust 1
Saved from Loneliness 1
Without a Frown 1
Love Unknown 1
Missing You 2
Oh Little Raven 2
Closing the Door 5
Missing Younger Years 2
I Hate You 0
Sadie Hawkins 1
Remember, You Promised... 1
Surprise Me, Please 0
Only Wishing 1
Seventeen Years of Waiting 0
Yearning for You 0
Eyes 1
Thousand Times I've Cried 2
The Worst Kind of Killer 1
Tears I Weep 0
Will You Be My Neighbor? 1
Late Night's Passion 0
Stay 0
My Inner Rage 0
Together Forever 0
Somehow I'll Win 1
I Am Alone 0
So Long, So Close, Together Again 0
Loneliness...
at this Rate
1
Going Insane 4
My Dear Silent Friend 2
My Cage 0
Murderers of Love 6
Future Without You 1
My Anti-Depressa
nt
0
My Prince Charming 0
Stay With You 2
Gossip 1
Quiting the Battle of Other's Concern 0
Lonely High-School 1
Pains For You 0
Senior Year 1
Writers Block 0
Keep Praying 0
I Am Here 0
Your Tumor 0
Words Spoken 1
A Breath of Faith 1