save the earth

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This poem is about nature that some people trying to save the earth or do not save the earth.

save the earth

Save The Earth

The earth is crying because of trash the only way is recycle

the nature is crying because of hunter the only way is to do not hunt the nature

the animal is crying because they don't have their home the only way is to do not crush the animal's house

the plant is crying because the young boy rip their flower the only way is to tell that young boy do not rip the flower

but people do that it hurt nature,earth,animal,and plant

I say we have to change our like to recycle,do not hunt nature,do not crush the animal's house,and do not rip the flower

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iStrangeDucky commented on save the earth

10-12-2009

Oh my. And you're only eight? By adult terms, this needs work. But by your age group? Magnificent. I would love to rewrite your poem and post it in my poems. I ask for your permission to re write it, and would much appreciate if you said yes.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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