Sad Eyed Angel

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    Sad Eyed Angel

    Sitting on the crest
    Of a newly formed rainbow
    Sat the sad eyed angel
    Looking down at earth below

    A moments worth of wondering
    Brings an endless train of thought
    She hears the distant thundering
    Of the knowledge she's been taught

    Slowly all the tears
    Will drift away with sunshine
    But the little sad eyed angel
    Knows there will be another time

    The winds of pain are blowing
    But through the rainbows colored glass
    Comes the real gift of knowing
    That nothing hear will last

    Can the meanings really mean
    So much to all the people
    When all is far beyond
    All of there golden steeples

    When all is given free
    There's no such thing as price
    And what was meant to be
    Lies in the tossing of the dice

    Yet the sad eyed angel
    Can't be sure of what she heard
    Was it relly this or that?
    Or just a single word?

    Take me from this rainbow
    Shy crys in desperation
    Let me go to earth below
    Give my soul a destination

    Slowly fades the rainbow
    And the sad eyed angel falls
    The purpose of her being
    Had made sense,Yet none-At All

    Hey do you think there's a place for angels,When they die that is? Jimbo/Copyright/75

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    am2anangel commented on Sad Eyed Angel

    07-09-2009

    Very well written; interesting philosophical piece. I almost felt you were talking about someone you view as an angel here on earth. In your 3rd to last stanza fix relly to really; Also I think you meant she cries not shy crys in desperation in the 2nd to last stanza. Please do not be offended by these corrections. I only hope someone lets me know when and if I have errors in my work so that I may correct them. Very well written I enjoyed this piece. I only hope to assist you in making this piece stronger with my suggestions. I enjoyed the flow of this piece.

    lionjr2 commented on Sad Eyed Angel

    01-24-2009

    I don't believe that angels ever die.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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