REWIND.....

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REWIND.....

I know we cant just push rewind, and clean up our mistakes in life.
but as we sit wishing we could it means we have thought twice.
what did u just do, who have u hurt, can u change your mind?
you kno u messed up you kno u were wrong, but can u just pick up and move along?who are you? and what have you become? can you do without making this mistake again? will you care if you lose all your friends? cant you just fight the urge to mess up and make things right? bring back the joy I felt when I saw ur smile, wake up and realize there is more at stake then just your life style. I would grant you the chance to go back in time if I could if youd promise me that youd take it all back and that we all just got you misunderstood, that this isnt you and not what you want.. that you kno who you are and youd make a better plan, wake up and see where you stand.
dont let ur mistakes take you so far away to a place where we kno you dont belong, come back to reality we all kno you are strong.
let the wisdom you still have guide you out, and start seeing what we are all talking about. For it wont be very long before your standing there wishing you could go back in time youll be asking yourself why cant i just push rewind.

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looking4life commented on REWIND.....

10-28-2009

if we all could just push rewind when things went wrong! life is like a play. filmed on unrewindable tape. once it plays out, it's gone. just like the sun rising every morning and setting each day. if only we could just push rewind. steve

JaLaw commented on REWIND.....

06-03-2009

This is an excellent read. There were many times when I wanted to push rewind. Great rhyme! Great style! I can't wait to read more.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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