Responsibility

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Since I have to take responsibility for my diabetes I thought that I should be a creative young man and create my own responsibility poem for those who struggle just like me and need a reminder of why life can be hard and how it teaches us to grow  and mature so we can conquer not a war but many wars and struggles because we have the power to do so if we use it wisely. Even though you may not feel the power it still resides within our soul and mind. So take the time to find your inner-strength.  

Responsibility

To some people responsibility becomes their enemy....

 But is really a positive doing in your life.

 Responsibility may be hard at times but even though it may upset you

 don't make it into a crime.

 Responsibility can make you strong if you take care of it right,

without it can  make you weak just like poor eyesight.

It pumps me up like a insulin filled needle

 because of my inner-strenghth I am far from feeble.

 The strenghth that responsibility gives makes me hungry for more

 like a long struggle for victory
 I have won the WAR!  

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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