RENDEZVOUS (for My Uncommon Love)

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    RENDEZVOUS (for My Uncommon Love)

    Let me take your hand

    and lead you along

    the true path of love and

    where the leaves rustle long

     in the cool breeze.

     

    Let me take the lead

    to stumble first

    on the cobblestones bed

    lest your naïve nimble toes burst

     to crush the thistles.

     

    Let me have your hand

    to feel the smooth coolness

    of the warm moisture band

    in your green palm caress

    creased with intricate curves.

     

    Let me take the lead

    to cushion the blaze of the sun

    on your embryonic supple skin

    lest your soft furs

    flicker and wither.

     

    Let me take your hand

    to hold firm the un-aged heart

    that I tremble for

    lest I falter and

    blunder and stutter.

     

    Let us go together

    where none can

    trace our path

    to lose the world behind

    and find ourselves alone.

     

    Let us grow wings and

    fly away to that place

    where we and only we

    know so well, where

    we talk in mute silence.

     

    Let us go My Love

    and stay in the place

    where we and only we

    have discovered, where

    love is the air to breathe.

     

    Let us leave now

    for I fear the

    unwholesome breeze

    of this loveless world

    threatens our uncommon flame.

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    ListninEar commented on RENDEZVOUS (for My Uncommon Love)

    05-25-2010

    Uh oh, now THIS one is my favorite one. I like this one a LOT!!!

    CongoNetherland commented on RENDEZVOUS (for My Uncommon Love)

    07-01-2009

    Sweetness Man. Well done. I would complain about capitalization, but it is trivial. You do very well with writing. HOW?? You are in Lagos? I am impressed. Very well done. I don't give easy critiques. You earned it.

    MsAngel1004 commented on RENDEZVOUS (for My Uncommon Love)

    06-28-2009

    This was an awesome love poem....I really enjoy reading your writting, some i read more than once, to recieve a clear understanding, now everyday when i come home from work, i will look forward to signing on and reading your poetry,be blessed...

    vincenzo

    07/02/2009

    thanks babe (hope i got the gender right) you make my head swell to bursting point.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    vincenzo’s Poems (12)

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    RELICS OF MY LIFE 6
    MY FOE 3
    SAINT S 3
    ERU!!! 2
    THE PRISON IS OPEN TO US ALL 4
    VALLEY OF DEATH 6
    WHO KNOWS TOMORROW 1
    RENDEZVOUS (for My Uncommon Love) 3