Release

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    Release

    Not rhyming and no verses is all dandy

    Woman turn men into bad vessels

    mad at the world saying they can't stand me

    everybody born with more bumps then bruises

    women change on a day to day basis

    because they was taught to be choosers

    setting themselves up so they end up with losers

    complaining about this and that

    carrying a full load

    slave days over no said you had to carry dudes on your back

    stand on your own two feet and let the light shine

    Be strong and dominate that's how i got mines

    I strive for success so I made it my addiction

    This is a true story and just a movie audition

    So I made up a application Because a boo is what i am missing

    Resume on point because I don't like competition

    and I can not share

    I'm loving and kind so I need someone who I can compare

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    GucciGurl commented on Release

    02-12-2010

    Loving and kind. yes true but Im that way and people still want to use. keep writtting

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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