Release

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My feelings of going through a break up. Wanting to find some form of release from all the anguish and sadness that overshelmingly takes over your whole body.

Release

Take me away, to another place

So far away, to another day

Give me release. Please let me be

Give me the strength to find some relief

Take me to a higher state of mind

Where I can find a sense of peace

Where I can sleep once through the night

And feel again like I am me

Under the hands of God

I beg for a release

The weight to be lifted

The breaths to come easily

Its something I have insisted

But could never do it peacefully

Take me through the ebbs and flows of the moon’s gaze

Allow me to wither in its shadow

Let me touch and feel the contours of her face

So I know that I am not hollow

Under the mercy of God’s hands

I search to be set free

From the yearning of his touch

And the hold he has over me

I beg for the tears to stop bleeding

I scream for my voice to be heard

Im longing to not have any of these feelings

But I cant seem to speak a single word

Take me through the blues of the sky

Let the wind blanket my soul

Allow me to rise above and up high

And eat your fruits and flowers whole

Take me away, to another place

So far away, to another day

Give me release

Give me the strength to find some relief

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looking4life commented on Release

10-31-2009

NataliaJude, i really like this poem. and i read the comments of the others. sometimes running away is not the answer. and not all of us can just jump up and go to europe or somewhere like that. maybe a drive in the country. to see how others live right here in our world. i, myself, haven't been in love for a lot of years. i was married for forteen, but there was very little love shown. she cheated on me and abused me like an animal. but i kept trying for years to keep us together, until one day, i desided that mabe it just wasn't meant to be. i still have feelings for her, and still hurt when i think about her and her new boyfreind. if you need a break, talk to me. together, we can get you through anything. after all, we are freinds now. steve

SweetSatin commented on Release

10-25-2009

Once you give your heart to someone, the part you give isnt returned. Its theirs and you have to use the lost as a lesson for healing

icu2 commented on Release

10-21-2009

Jesus said: "I am that rest which causeth the weary to rest." Sounds like Ya need a little divine-T.L.C. By the way...very nice work here...TEN........for sure.

nataliajude

10/21/2009

thank you!

mindkiller420 commented on Release

10-20-2009

wonderful poem,i have felt that way many times and i know where you are coming from.you really bared your soul. great job. excellent!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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