Release my soul

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Release my soul


anger rushes over her she cries out, waiting,
is there ever a hero?
No!
she sits and waits to be swept away by an angel
a release of a soul into a new place
no more pain

when she gets there she waits for her happiness

but, it never comes

how can this happen

she asks an angel

"where am i going to find happiness"

"not here" they answer

she weeps for her life she has taken

 

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Shay86 commented on Release my soul

02-14-2012

Wow!!! I really did not expect that. Great poem I wish it had more to it, but it was still great. Good job!!

poetryofemotion

02/14/2012

i wrote it quickly before i went to school, thanks for commenting :)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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