regret

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    regret

    should i have followed the footsteps of the hollow mindsets thinking that my spirit and dignity should have left conspiracy sets in am i a fool for taking the bet the problem cant be fixed once hope is gone life begins... to dim from afar our sins seem so small but since im so close i cant see much at all but a blur of all my flaws 

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    xxpowersxx commented on regret

    05-31-2009

    hah wow man, i feel exactly that way. As i started reading i just ended up reading faster...I dont know if you intended your readers to do that. It almost seemed like you wanted to enduce a read frenzy to get your small but huge point acrossed. absolutely love it.
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    eclecticchic202 commented on regret

    05-31-2009

    I like the feelings that you are trying to convey in this piece. It makes the reader think and question tif they are doing the same thing to themselves. Excellent poem!
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    Tetsugin

    05/31/2009

    thank you I appreciate your comments

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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