Reflection

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I look in the mirror seeing my reflection staring back at me I turn around to walk away My reflection is still standing there with a soulless stare

Reflection

I look in the mirror
seeing my reflection staring
back at me
I turn around to walk away
like I do everyday
My reflection is still standing their
with a lifeless stare
I become scared and loose all state of mind
as my reflection looks to it's side
staring at me with soulless eyes
Oh my goodness how can this be?
I say out loud to myself
I slowly back away
then I freeze
It pulls it's hair
I fall to the floor
taking it's hands squeezing it's neck
I began to choke
what the heck
I began to whimper
I get enough stregnth to scream
while my reflection is still staring at me
the door opens
someone heard my scream
I look up to the mirror
my reflection is know longer
staring back at me

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MrGoth commented on Reflection

01-20-2012

this reminds me of a horror movie or a really bad personality clash but i like and where you went with it and made it simple and sweet

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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