Recubo

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Recubo

Your eyes,
Are filled with lies,
Your deceptions make me cry,
How could you sit there and lie,
I know what you've done,
Your infidelity has come and gone,
Don't tell me I'm wrong,
I'm sitting here trying to be strong,
I can't believe you've been playing me all along,
I don't know how much more i can take,
I can't sit here and let my heart ache,
I can't be with someone that acts so fake,
Get away from me,
I'm about to break,
My hand is starting to shake,
the gun goes off,
I throw your body in the lake,
You were a mistake!

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rossmangeles commented on Recubo

06-30-2009

Your poem is simply so great. I love it. I love the message, the rhyme and the choice of words. Keep it up! Cheers! I think that you are naturally sweet, but don't throw the body in the lake even though he was a mistake.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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