Real Man

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Real Man

 A man breaks into my home .I fucked him up and broke some bones and sent him to the darkness on his own . Now comes my trial and here we go. Tell the judge he threw the first stone . Son your getting 20 to life with no parole, look what u did to that man your out of control . I was fighting for my life my kid and my wife. I only did what any man should do when faced by a knife now you ganna sentence me to life in jail. i hear my wife in the background starting to wail. 


Mr. Land you know the law states you must abandon in case a break in occurs to happen . Oh great so u want me to escape, let my wife get raped. I'll just go hide in the trees ,call the police, while my wife gets butt fucked under my sheets.. waiting for a deputy ...

FUCK THAT SHIT YOUR LAWS MEAN NOTHING its my honor and duty as a man to do something I'm ganna come in pissed off fire in my eyes a bat in my hand and a nine on my side i don't give a fuck if its jesus christ I'm ganna torture this man I'm ganna burn him alive I'm ganna beat him till his mom telepathically cries bury him half alive in my backyard with a smirk and a twinkle in my eye. 

And thats why sir we are putting you in prison, for the torture and the murder that you committed. And thats fine i said with tears in my eyes, aslong as my wife is safe and my kid is alive .She can even get remarried if thats what she likes.I did this for them not for my own demise ..

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MarionYost commented on Real Man

04-10-2010

Wow, I LOVED THIS. Great piece and I agree with you completely. Awesome job. 10. All the best -Marion-

nini2323 commented on Real Man

04-02-2010

Dude I dig this. I think it's a really good description of why that law sucks

ladynight commented on Real Man

02-19-2010

this poem is amazing. the feeling and emotion of it right on the surface. the words strong and powerfully written. not enough people feel this way. i definitely relate to what you are saying. society is so f-ed that way. the burglar gets off scot free and the man protecting his family goes to prison for taking the law into his own hands. you expressed that quite well in your poem. great write.

knight4696 commented on Real Man

02-18-2010

Glub - Powerful and raw! Great imagery and flow .. Damn Powerful! :) Ken

mistynites26 commented on Real Man

12-06-2009

WOW Strong and fire filled write.......very nice glub

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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