-Reading Between the Lines-

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...19 yrs married to him, divorced from him for 2yrs, just got remarried to him...yes there is HOPE in our RELATIONSHIP

-Reading Between the Lines-

Too young to know what's REAL
Too immature to think without EMOTIONS
Too weak not to be CARRIED 
Too independent to depend on US
Nothing can get THROUGH

COMMITTMENT to no-one
HELPED only yourselves
BUT willing to take from everyone
GOD knows your secrets
HE is always there
PICKED on by peers
UP to no good
THE truth will come out
PEICES of your souls will shatter

You know WE'RE here for you
We're always WILLING to help you
You are never TO throw in the towel
We are not going to GIVE up on you
You must let US be there
Don't let ANOTHER day go by
It might become difficult, but TRY to overcome your adversities.

REAL EMOTIONS CARRIED US THROUGH
COMMITTMENT HELPED BUT GOD- HE PICKED UP THE PEICES
WE'RE WILLING TO GIVE US ANOTHER TRY

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Elke commented on -Reading Between the Lines-

07-02-2009

Ps.............................................................................You're my first 10.

Elke commented on -Reading Between the Lines-

07-02-2009

Wow, DivaGranny. That is the most clever poem I've read. I would have never conceived of the idea. How Creative.

freind commented on -Reading Between the Lines-

06-25-2009

that could not be put any better .you did a beautiful job. i know what you are saying.expression is what is all about. do it again it was great.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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