REACHING FOR THE TOP

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    REACHING FOR THE TOP
    We are reaching for the top
    so step aside, We're not going
    to run or even hide

    We are not ashamed of the color
    of our skin, Come join hands
    with us and be our friend

    When we reach the top we will
    shout out loud, THAT WE ARE
    BROTHER AND WE ARE PROUD.

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    Plot121 commented on REACHING FOR THE TOP

    12-09-2008

    this is very good intro, the last could have been improved with brothers and sisters banding us all together as one just a thought take care good write, Robert...
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    ivecute77 commented on REACHING FOR THE TOP

    12-08-2008

    this is a great poem and should be sent around the world in an e-mail for the whole world to read.
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    KJULEST commented on REACHING FOR THE TOP

    12-06-2008

    this is great.... keep up the work,,,
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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