randoms thoughts...

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    randoms thoughts...

    my knife wakes you to life

    your suffering opens your eyes

    and here, i sit and sip on my wine

    listening for that sigh,

    sigh of pained relief

    for having spilled a little of your self

    staining my old sweater

    leaving your sweet innocence

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    ivecute77 commented on randoms thoughts...

    11-23-2008

    i like this one, but i felt like when i got to the end that it wasn't the end.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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