"OUCH"

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  • Lost Love

    "OUCH"
    Trust?
    You stole it.
    Love?
    You didn't want mine.
    Honesty?
    You didn't have any.
    Responsibility?
    You laughed in it's face.
    Me?
    I loved you.
    You?
    You loved her.
    Hate?
    You instilled.
    Crazy?
    I was.
    Selfish?
    You were.
    Considerate?
    I was always.
    Care?
    You didn't,
    And with that
    came the biggest pain.
    Let go?
    I did.

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    graceladymn commented on "OUCH"

    02-21-2009

    There is more begging to be written here, I hope you consider what it is that longs to be said and write it in another piece. This is a nice start to something else much deeper than letting go.
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    majestic commented on "OUCH"

    02-16-2009

    That was very deep young sista. Keep it up for real.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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