"A poem to my mother"

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    "A poem to my mother"

    "A poem to my mother"

    My instinct told me to react abruptly.
    To put everything on hold for her indefinitely
    See my heart sings tunes that only her heart can dance too,
    I was the other half to her,
    in other words I was nothing without her,
    I just wanted her to live
    so that she could dance with me physically,
    But she found that she could
    only live happily ever after spiritually,
    And literally I disagreed MOST defiantly
    not excepting fates destiny,
    So I begged, cried, and to GOD I prayed,
    That she could just stay until I lived to be old & gray,
    Because I painted this picture in my head,
    And never the one that lead me to the foot of her bed,
    While leading me to take her by the hand,
    I watched in agony as my mother & friend
    took her last breath,
    So now I must see if I can past life’s test,
    And lay my mind to rest
    that I can still dance with her by all means,
    It’s just that now,
    we dance & play music only in my dreams!

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    KeithAColeman commented on "A poem to my mother"

    01-27-2012

    definitely a poem that has the power to bring a person to tears. thanx for sharing this with the world. its crazy how sometimes sadness, hurt and pain can become such a great expression in writing,

    Qualin commented on "A poem to my mother"

    05-23-2011

    very good write...a fact: there are more tatoos of or about" MOTHERS", than any other they are very special...to each we say we have the very best.....well I did thank GOD!!!! QUALIN

    tsgirl commented on "A poem to my mother"

    06-13-2009

    GORGEOUS, 100% WON'T DO I GIVE 1000% FOR YOU 10 MONTHS AGO I WAS IN YOUR SHOES SO I FEEL U. STAY WRITING GIRL IT'S GOOD FOR OUR HEARTS.

    dario7 commented on "A poem to my mother"

    05-18-2009

    ouch! nice write, share your dreams gal, keep up the good work

    JadedJezzabel commented on "A poem to my mother"

    05-18-2009

    very well written and exceptionally touching. I'm so sorry for your loss. 10

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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