Proud of Place

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    Proud of Place

    Proud of Place

     

     

    Allowing me to run free

    in an open field with

    warm, long green grasses

    under my hooves

     

    Eagle overhead, we race,

    I want to win -

    my heart pounding

    against my chest

     

    I follow the eagle

    into the canyon,

    my hooves pound

    against the hard dirt

     

    I race the eagle

    hearing my hooves

    against the stones

    drives me on to win

     

    I love you for

    allowing me to run free

    to my wild place,

    with you riding bareback.

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    knight4696 commented on Proud of Place

    02-06-2010

    I have to agree with Insideme - You certainly have a way with combining the animal and spirit - Great Job! :) Ken

    Insideme commented on Proud of Place

    02-05-2010

    I love how you put yourself into this piece, it is from animals that we find our own spirit. I love it.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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